We are the same

You talk to me, know I won’t tell.
You talk to me, describe your hell.

I hear your words, see me in you.
I hear your words, I’ve said them too.

You talk to me, I feel your pain.
I hear your words, we are the same.

2 thoughts on “We are the same

  1. Thank you Sofia!

    Yes, every word counts. Structure too. The last stanza that brings the “You” and “I” viewpoints together adds more layers of meaning.

    Shona x

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